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Post  eren-gayger on Tue Dec 09, 2014 9:54 pm

1. Ilona Pelathy




JOB APPLICATION

【 APPEARANCE 】

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【 THE BASICS 】

Name: Ilona Pelathy

Alias: Justify


Age: 18


Sexuality: Bisexual

Relationship Status:Single

Height:5'5

Species: Human

Place of Origin: Pécs, Hungary


【 DETAIL 】

Series: Sector 8

Personality: She’s quite straight forward on the line of being blunt. She tries to act like a big sister, but often times fails because of her stubborn and headstrong nature. Underneath also trying to act really tough, she’s actually quite sweet.


Biography: When she was young, Ilona's father was found guilty for a crime he didn't commit. Once her father was arrested, her mother went into a depression and killed herself. Ilona was adopted by a loving family, yes, but she became obsessed with learning law so she could prove her father innocent. Unfortunately, he died in prison, but Ilona was still obsessed with law, so she is now studying to be a lawyer. Her powers are not magic based, but technology based.  


【 BATTLE INFO 】

Fighting Style: Krav maga- is a self-defense system developed for the military in Israel that consists of a wide combination of techniques sourced from Boxing, Combat Sambo, Muay Thai, Wing Chun, Judo, Jujutsu, Wrestling, Aikido and Grappling, along with realistic fight training. She learned this fighting style from her adoptive father, who had studied it in his youth.

Skills:
Dual swords

『Justice is blind 』 - This attack allows Ilona to blind her opponents for a short amount of time.

『Justice is swift』 - This allows Ilona to have a boost of speed when attacking her enemy, only lasts a short while though.

『Chains of justice』 - This allows Ilona to summon change that bind the guilty, never those who are innocent.


►Guilty as charged◄ - Ilona’s finishing move allows her to take those who are guilty onto the scales of justice- and if the scales find their soul guilty, than they are taken to a magical gallows to fulfil their punishment.

【 OPTIONAL 】

Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IeVCCfZbCfM

Inspirations: The law

Friends:

Foes:

Creed:
The golden eye of justice sees, and requites the unjust man.


Extra Notes / Trivia:
(For anything not mentioned prior!)


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Re: Eren's gays

Post  Emu Queen on Sun Dec 14, 2014 3:45 pm

She`s super cute! I`m digging the justice gimmick! o u o There`s just a few things I`d like you to go back and address:

1. Her skills-- are they fueled by magic? Or technology? Either way- could you go back into the bio and mention how she got her magic if she did, what connects her to these magical gallows, and what exactly they are? Also maybe how she got her swords, and how they connect to her magic? Your bio doesn`t provide much explanation for why she`s a magical girl, why or how she joined MSI, or how she qualifies to be a magical girl (qualifications being they are somehow above ordinary in any way). I`d suggest glancing at the other profiles to see how other people did stuff!

2. Could you describe in the fighting style section what Krav maga is, how she uses it, and how she learned it?

Thank you!
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